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Who’s Outside the Door?

brown doorframe and door about a fourth open
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“Who’s Outside the Door?” by Joan Y. Edwards

I thought it would be fun to do a writing exercise. Last year we wrote about what we saw outside our window. This year, I thought it would be fun to write about guessing who is outside your door and then finding out who it really was…a mystery or a comedy.

In the case of you were expecting your sister and her boyfriend to be outside the door…

man and woman in snow outside flower shop
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and instead, you found this cow.

cow outside green double doors
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In your story, use these images to help you write your interpretation or write a different story altogether using at least the word “Door” in your title and having 200-300 words.  Please share your story  in the comment area or email it to me before midnight on January 31, 2023.

Blue Ribbon to show that You Make a Difference

I will choose up to three Blue Ribbon stories…for outstanding description, dialogue, and/or mystery or comedy elements.

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What Makes a Good Mystery?


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What Makes a Good Mystery? by Joan Y. Edwards

I’ve always loved a good mystery. I started out reading the Bobbsey Twins. I read every one of them that were published in fourth grade. I couldn’t wait to finish one and get to the next one. I had to walk a mile to get to the library. It was worth it.

When I taught school, I fell in love with Nate the Great and Encyclopedia Brown.

There are many good detective series on television that I enjoy is . Columbo, starring Peter Falk. He makes me laugh. I must admit I wouldn’t watch the first 15 minutes so that I wouldn’t see the murder happen. On an ironic note, one time they had two murders! They sneaked one in on me.

What makes a good mystery?

Someone commits a crime.

A good mystery novel challenges the reader to figure out who committed the crime before the detective explains how it was done, who did it, and why at the end. 

Red Herrings are fake clues given to throw the detective and the readers off track. These red herring characters mislead or distract the detective from a relevant or important question.

The main character in the story is usually the detective who wants to solve the mystery and apprehend the person who committed the crime.

Each character who is a prime suspect in a mystery needs to have at least one of these three things:

  1. Motive a reason for doing the crime for financial gain or to seek revenge
  2. Means to commit the crime having tools and physical capabilities of committing the crime
  3. Opportunity to do it and be at the actual scene of the crime

Of course, we know that the real person who did it will answer yes to motive, means, and opportunity.

The detective discovers the answers to motive, means, and opportunity by interviewing characters and investigating the scene where the crime took place.

I believe a suspect chooses a weapon that gives him the best chance to do the crime and get away it.

The following books are good mysteries to me.

Gertrude Chandler Warner: Boxcar Children,
Laura Lee Hope: The Bobbsey Twins
Donald J. Sobol: Encyclopedia Brown
Marjorie Weinman Sharmat: Nate the Great
Janet Evanovich:  Stephanie Plum Series
Arthur Conan Doyle: The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes

What are your favorite mysteries? Why do you like mysteries? Do you write mysteries? Tell me one title and why you wrote it.

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  1. Autocrit. “6 Non-Fishy Ways to Plant Red Herrings in Your Story:” https://www.autocrit.com/blog/6-non-fishy-ways-plant-red-herrings-story/
  2. Joseph Wu. “Red Herring – Critical Thinking Fallacies:” https://youtu.be/Af0STrY58i4
  3. Learning Mind. “12 of the Best Mystery Books Best Mystery Books That Will Keep You Guessing Until the Last Page:” https://www.learning-mind.com/best-mystery-books/
  4. M.T. Logan. “What Makes a Good Mystery:” https://mtlogan.wordpress.com/2010/08/24/what-makes-a-good-mystery/
  5. Nancy Curtemen. “5 Ways to Create Red Herrings in a Mystery Novel:” https://globalmysteriesblog.com/2011/07/07/5-ways-to-create-red-herrings-in-a-mystery-novel/
  6. Ramona DeFelice Long. “17 Ways to Mess Up Your Murder Mystery:” https://ramonadef.com/2014/06/24/17-ways-to-mess-up-your-murder-mystery/
  7. Simon Whistler. Today I Found Out. “How the Phrase Red Herring Came To Mean Something That is Misleading:” https://youtu.be/kWCQ4XDq4ng
  8. Scholastic. “Ingredients for a Mystery:” https://www.scholastic.com/content/dam/teachers/lesson-plans/migrated-featured-files/jan_ingredientsmystery.pdf
  9. Stephen D. Rogers. “Red Herrings:https://www.writing-world.com/mystery/herrings.shtml
  10. Wiki-How. “How to Write Detective Stories:” https://www.wikihow.com/Write-Detective-Stories
  11. Writers’ Bureau. “Crime Novels:” https://www.writersbureau.com/writing/crime-novels.htm



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