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“The Golden Arm” by Joan Y. Edwards

cover for the Golden Arm by Joan Y. Edwards

“The Golden Arm” by Joan Y. Edwards

I am excited to tell you that The Golden Arm, a camp ghost story, a legendary folktale that I told as a teenager, told  to my cousins, nephews, and nieces, and told to my fourth and fifth grade students at Fairview School in Union County is now a published book with illustrations by Dazzling Media, I am thankful to God, my family, and friends who have believed in me and encouraged me.
When I told “The Golden Arm” to students at Fairview School (1967-1977), they kept asking me to tell more. They said, “That can’t be the end of the story.”

So I added more to the story. I even gave the characters names. This seemed to satisfy the students and made me think about actually writing the story down.
in 1994 as Joan M. York, I entered it into a writing contest with Parent without Partners. I won first place ribbon and a trophy. Only trophy I have ever won.

trophy for writing contest with Parents without Partners in 1994

I entered it into a few scary story contests. and scary story magazines. One magazine editor said, “The Golden Arm” is so funny, which meant he laughed more than he panicked. Which made me feel good. Because I wanted it to be scary and funny.

Last year, 2024, my good friend, Bill Harvey said, “Joan, you’ve got so many stories. People need to hear them.” That encouraged me. I decided to find an illustrator on Fiverr.com. A friend had used the services of a few people on there. So voila, I saw the work of a group called, Dazzling Media. Arpita was their leader.  I wanted a full color illustration for each chapter as well as the cover…a picture book/chapter book combination. I wanted them to be beautiful, magical, and captivate  you, the readers with the story of Minerva and Abijah in The Golden Arm.

I also made it 16 point font, a little larger print to honor those who might need a larger font to read the story easily.

I am very honored that Carla Stack, Sharon Benfield, Irv Edelstein, David Collins, and  Melanie Robertson-King gave me the following reviews:

“The Golden Arm” by Joan Y. Edwards, Illustrated by Dazzling Media is now available on Amazon as an Ebook and a Paperback.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/1966006004/ref=

Minerva, admired for her beauty, demands a golden arm from her husband, Abijah. Her vanity and his greed lead them into a world of ghostly consequences. Readers in grades 4-7 will keep turning pages to discover the suspense and chilling twists and turnsof this haunting tale.

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Copyright © 2025 Joan Y. Edwards
Chapter 1
The Most Beautiful Arms

My wife, Minerva, had the most beautiful arms of anyone in town. When she walked down the streets of Shallott, everyone stopped to stare.

Almost breathless, husbands exclaimed, “Ahh! Look at those lovely arms! I wish my wife had arms of such beauty.”

The wives sighed, “If only my husband showed that much passion for my arms. Mine feel so inadequate.”

To keep her arms lovely, Minerva rubbed them every morning with the gel from the aloe plant in her bedroom window. It was a great healer. However, it did not heal the pain of her grandmother’s death. She always talked with her grandma to solve her problems before she passed away. It was easier for my wife to believe that Grandma was alive on Ancestor Mountain, than to accept the fact that she was dead.


Reviews

The Golden Arm is a delightful book with captivating illustrations. This book shares the fun roles of Minerva and Abijah in a riveting story to a young audience. Joan Y. Edwards’ book inspires love and forgiveness and is a must read for all in any family!
…Carla Stack

The Golden Arm is an entertaining re-telling of an old folktale. It is scary, with just the right amount of humor to lighten the tale. The action scenes are gripping. The illustrations are perfect. A fun story, both inside and outside of the grave.
…Irving Edelstein

The Golden Arm reminds me of Aesop’s Fables. It is an intriguing story that teaches a truth in an enjoyable way. Fun story. Fascinating pictures.
…Sharon Benfield

Midnight rides to talk with grandma in the graveyard, parasols comically wielded as weapons, ghostly visitations with glowing eyes–it’s all here in an engaging moral fable about the power of forgiveness that entertains and delights as it teaches.
…David Collins
Joan Y. Edwards’s latest children’s book, The Golden Arm, is a delightful story about Minerva and her husband Abijah. When Minerva is killed in a tragic accident, her husband steals her golden arm from her grave. Not letting her husband’s greed stop her from the other side, she wages her revenge from beyond.
The tale of The Golden Arm leaves the reader pondering Minerva and Abijah’s actions. Vanity and greed are the main motives behind the characters’ actions, and they teach young readers about the consequences of both.
….Melanie Robertson-King
 Purchase link:
“The Golden Arm by Joan Y. Edwards
https://www.amazon.com/dp/1966006004/ref=
Please let me know if you would have me as a guest on your blog to tell about The Golden Arm. All reviews are welcome.
Thank you very much to the following people who left a comment on this post before midnight December 15, 2025.
1. Carol Baldwin
2. Melanie Robertson-King
3. Joan B. Reid
4. Emma Shipes
5. Bill Harvey
I used Random.org to choose a number between 1 and 5 to win. a free autographed copy of The Golden Arm. It chose Number 1, therefore Carol Baldwin, you won a free autographed copy of The Golden Arm as you were the first to leave a comment.

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Fantasy Novel Essentials

Fantasy Novel Essentials

“Fantasy Novel Essentials” by Joan Y. Edwards

Let’s say you’re like me. You’re in the midst of writing a fantasy novel Mine could easily fall into the science fiction genre.  Perhaps yours might, too. Tricky business figuring out the essential elements of a fantasy novel. You want to include them to make your story compelling and unforgettable.

To get a better handle on Fantasy genre, read myths, legends, fairy tales, and fables to ground yourself in fantasy worlds. Read best-seller fantasy novels and watch fantasy movies: Harry Potter, The Hobbit, Lord of the Rings, Alice in Wonderland, Toy Story, Up, Mary Poppins, The Chronicles of Narnia. But what is a fantasy novel?

Don’t Confuse Fantasy with Science Fiction

Cliffs Notes says that Fantasy fiction is frequently confused with science fiction, which might incorporate some of the same tones and themes, but the plot of a science fiction story will also rely on technology that is advanced beyond what we know today.

However, if you do merge the two genres, you’ll get the new speculative fiction genre.

In Science Fiction, it could happen in real life if certain facts were true.  Science fiction is based more on facts of what could happen.

Asimov, who wrote many Science Fiction novels said science fiction should have only one untrue assumption.

I remember following a newspaper comic strip 1952 until 1963 called Twin Earths.  Another planet similar to the earth where women ruled. On this twin earth was someone who looked like you. It seemed so real. It was amazing Science Fiction.

What is a Fantasy novel?

Fantasy takes magic to make something happen.. It could never happen in real life. It could never happen without the magic element.

Sheila M Johnson states that fantasy fiction has three parts: a magical system, imaginary creatures, and a made-up setting.

Storyboard That says Fantasy is characterized by imaginary and unrealistic elements. Fantasies typically involve supernatural powers, like magic and magical creatures.

Now Novel lists five components for the Fantasy genre. They also offer you a way to test your story ideas.

After reading the resources below, I believe you need these four elements for a good fantasy novel.

What Elements Does a Fantasy Novel Contain?

  1. Magic –  creating results through mysterious, unexplained, or supernatural powers. Fantasy stories often have elements of middle ages (Medieval times)  such as castles, knights, kings, magical swords, and references to ancient spells. Give details of the cost, joys, and dangers of magic.  What are the rules for the magic that appears in your story?  What is the cause and effect of the magic? How does it change the  world and the people in it.
  2.  Adventure – dangers and joys of adventure ; gains and losses of change of imaginary creatures or characters
  3. Struggle for Mastery of Self – Using ones own magical powers effectively and wisely for positive or destructive ends . Show character’s unique abilities and limitations. Are the characters animals? Can the animals talk? What other human traits do they have?  is it a fight between good and evil? How does good combat evil forces there? Have the main character solve his problems without using his magical skills.
  4. Setting – Government, culture, religion, historical era,  geography, neighborhood, community, world,  time of day Where is this community that you built? What does the world look like?  How is it different from our world as it is today? Do they use money to purchase things? Or do they trade? Do they allow more than one wife? Are they allowed to marry outside of their community?  Do they protect the old? Do they allow abortion?  Are they allowed to use fossil fuel? What do they do with their garbage? Place/Setting World’s effects on the main character/ main character’s effects on the real world.

Here is food for thought. Study the genre. Write your story. Then figure out what genre or genres it fits into. There are so many sub-genres today. I’m sure they’ll find a place for your story.

References:

  1. Claire Bradshaw. “5 Essential Elements Every Fantasy Novel Needs:” https://writersedit.com/fiction-writing/5-essential-elements-every-fantasy-novel-needs/
  2. Creative Writing Now. “How to Write Fantasy”
    https://www.creative-writing-now.com/how-to-write-fantasy.html
  3. Josh Jackson & Paste Books Staff. “50 Best Fantasy Novels of the 21st Century:” https://www.pastemagazine.com/books/fantasy-books/the-50-best-fantasy-novels-of-the-21st-century/
  4. Myth Creants. “Five Essentials of Historical Fantasy:” https://mythcreants.com/blog/five-essentials-of-historical-fantasy
  5. Now Novel. “Best Fantasy Series – 7 Lessons:” https://www.nownovel.com/blog/best-fantasy-series-7-lessons/
  6. Now Novel. “Elements of Fantasy:” https://www.nownovel.com/blog/elements-of-fantasy/
  7. Now Novel. “Fantasy Book Writing Help:” https://www.nownovel.com/blog/fantasy-book-writing-help/
  8. Fine Me an Author. “Fantasy Fiction Genre:” http://www.findmeanauthor.com/fantasy_fiction_genre.htm
  9. Storyboard That. “Fantasy:” https://www.storyboardthat.com/genres/fantasy
  10. Writers Bureau. “Writing a Fantasy Novel:” https://www.writersbureau.com/writing/writing-a-fantasy-novel.htm

I hope this helped you decide a little about what to include in your fantasy novel.  Please leave a comment telling me your favorite fantasy novel and why you like it. What are your secrets to getting the Fantasy genre straight? Have you written a Fantasy work? What’s the title? Whose your favorite character?

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Joan Y. Edwards, Author
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